He didn't fall asleep until 6:00 a.m, he had school witht he girl in all of his classes "What am I going to do???" By the end of class the girl's eyes swold back up as tears ran down her cheeks,off her chin annd down into her long black hair that hung low aroung he ankles. He shut his eyes and tried to imagine the girl happy and excited to see what the day had for her like she had been for the past three years, this wasn't what he wanted not at all! The first time he had met her she was like she is now, full of sorrow and not looking forward to living the next hour in her horrible life, but when he had saved her she turned her life around, she cleaned herself up. He knew why he picked her at the beginning, she was young and weak, he knew she wouldn't be able to stand it if he left her after all that time. But slowly he began to fall for this girl whom was his victim, totally unaware that onne day he would turn on her and leave her all alone. Even though he was completely aware he was falling for her he still carried on wiht his evil plan to ruin her life. He wanted to die, the feeling inside was to hard to bare knowing what thing he had done while knowing this would've happened the whole time. He didn't dare make eye contact with the girl nor look at her, he could feel her looking at him, her eyes big and full of tears tore him apart inside like some one had turned on him and ripped him apart on purpose the boy slowly turned his head and- I'll write more tomorrow bye
Ellie***Belly
You have a real gift for suspense! I can't wait to find out more about these characters. :)
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