Monday, September 20, 2010
I knew it was wrong to have dad pick me up from school every day at 8;30 but going to teh house dad was working on was so much funner! It reminded me of an old house that the Omish would live in! It was white with many windows and three stories high, I could clomb out one of the windows at the very top of the stairs that led put onto the roof. All the time I would go up onto the roof and sit, think about the troubls life had given me. Out of all these days I spend out on the farm house I still sat lonely, until the new worker Mike came. Mike had a son named Jay, "Hey, my name's Jay!" "I know that numb skull." He smiled and tilted his head, "Well you just ain't that nice now are you?" I smiled and shook my head in a shy sort if way. "Hey, come with me Sussie!" "My name isn't-" "I don't care pumpkin face." He grabbed my wriste and pulled me out of the almost finished house, "So, let's go through the corn field, you wanna?" "Well, my dad kinda told me never to go through the corn field." Jay gave me a doubting look and said, "Yeah, yeah. You're just scared, or are you daddy's little girl huh?" "I am not!" "Then come on Sissy." "Fine!" He smiled in a wicked way that kinda creeped me out, but then I found myself in the middle of the corn field without Jay, I could hear a person trying to scream but I figured it wass him trying to scare me, "Jay, you're not fooling anyone now come on out here before I tel your father!" By this time I was sure he would come out! But, he didn't...the corn around me started to move, the thing got closer and closer! By the time I could see it the only use of stayign alive was to scream..."HELP!!!!" done, ill write more later
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Eeeeks! Very creepy - can't wait to find out what's in the corn! I love your description of the house, too.
ReplyDeleteRemember to seperate your dialogue when a new person speaks like we talked about. Example:
"Hey my name's Jay."
"I know that numbskull."
It makes it *much* easier to read and figure out who's speaking.
I love you more than worms love dirt! :)
lol, okay sorry
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